Thesis The thesis statement is very conclusive with a lot of information presented. There is no information presented in the thesis. The conclusion is present with a substantial closing argument.
Poor Writing is confusing and hard to follow. Many details are not in a logical or expected order.
The structure used is easily defined. The author of the essay pays no mind to the readers with comparison and contrasts not clear or helpful at all to the audience.
Fair At least one topic sentence is not clear nor does it relate to the thesis statement. Both subjects are given roughly the same space.