Then get it.
Get help I hope you know by now that Jericho Writers is a club for writers just like you. Abstract nouns are great — but big blocks of them?
Introduction of prose
He could see the white-washed rocks; the tower, stark and straight; he could see that it was barred with black and white; he could see windows in it; he could even see washing spread on the rocks to dry. Examples of Prose in Literature Example 1 I shall never be fool enough to turn knight-errant. We get many clients who write something rather like the following: He rolled in agony. They propose instead a basic analysis of style in terms of a set of fundamental decisions or assumptions by an author concerning 'a series of relationships: What can be known? It was kind of avant-garde in its day and it used to develop some strong character traits, but now it's just used as a cheap gimmick for pretentious film writers to draw a ton of attention to their writing style as opposed to serving the plot. The second sentence has some much less common words, lamb, tagine, scoops, mounded, porcelain, faded, floral, rim. Half and half? He had done the right thing, he told himself. To the Lighthouse by Virginia Woolf Virginia Woolf was noted for her stream-of-consciousness prose style. Who is the writer addressing and why? What can be put into words? But the crossing has already been enacted on the level of prose. Not sure what prose writing is? In vapid listlessness I leant my head against the window, and continued spelling over Catherine Earnshaw—Heathcliff—Linton, till my eyes closed; but they had not rested five minutes when a glare of white letters started from the dark, as vivid as spectres—the air swarmed with Catherines; and rousing myself to dispel the obtrusive name, I discovered my candle wick reclining on one of the antique volumes, and perfuming the place with an odour of roasted calf-skin. They are examples of fictional prose.
The base line for prose is colloquial speech. You want an example? One day, she would see this, too. About the author Harry Bingham has been a professional author for twenty years and more.
Look at this paragraph, for example: He walked slowly away, trying not to make any kind of sound.
Examples include biographies and essays. No data so far. So be picky. One great trick, used by plenty of pro authors,is to read your work aloud. Examples are novels. Seen it, read it. And the thing that needs to be said — the important thing — is what emerges in the act of saying it. So that was the Lighthouse, was it? The answer is, you write something and see how you feel about it. But the crossing has already been enacted on the level of prose. That moment of confusion, of mental re-adjustment, when for a split-second the distinction between the page and the world seems total and transparent, flowing. For example: It was one of those moments in childhood, where the future suddenly bloomed, like a field full of poppies. Only a scatter of diamonds here and there has effect, so go for it, if you can.
Clarity and correctness are the sine qua non of good speech. Would you make the change?
Example 6 And if sometimes, on the steps of a palace or the green grass of a ditch, in the mournful solitude of your room, you wake again, drunkenness already diminishing or gone, ask the wind, the wave, the star, the bird, the clock, everything that is flying, everything that is groaning, everything that is rolling, everything that is singing, everything that is speaking.
based on 47 review